Writing corrections of Writings done in Canvas (Diagnostic exam or Final exam, and sentences, mail, essay)

The people are in the library because there are a lot of books on the shelves, also they are searching and reading their books. 

The kids are in the kindergarten because they are standing there while the woman sitting in front of the kids is teaching them how to read a calendar.

 

The man is painting the wall, so he can be the owner of the house or maybe he can be a painter who was hired to paint the wall. 

0. Respond to the email 

   Dear Mr. Jackson,

   
   

   Thank you so much for your e-mail, I was waiting for it. I have one question about my booking and it’s, what time can I go to my bedroom? Or what time is the check-in? I ask you this because I don’t like to be waiting in the lobby while it’s time.

   
   

   And about the technical requirement I have two requests, the first one is that I need a projector to giving presentations, and I don’t know if your conference center have speakers, but if not I will need them so that everyone can hear the conference perfectly.

   Thanks you for everything, see you soon. 
   
   Yours sincerely Kim. 
   
   
   Opinion Essay
   
   
   

   My opinion in this subject was that maybe the limit shouldn’t be illegal but they should respect, because the kids need to go to school and not work, and I think that if the age limit loose power the bad parents will take advantage of that and the children will be working instead of studying.
   
   In Mexico this is one of the huge problems that we have, this problem is that a lot of children are in the street working instead of being studying. So, they have fewer opportunities to get a good job. The fact of not having an education that gives them an opportunity to overcome, these children in the future will be forced to become criminals because they have no other way to make money.
   
   So based in the above we can conclude that if we eradicate the limit age of working more children will be suffering exploitation by their parents, and the level of illiteracy will increase more and more with the along of the years, and what should be sought is